pen and paper

Wednesday, September 07, 2005

Loneliness
the prison for which I've encased myself
to safe keep my heart from break
loneliness
the distance between
making a move and staying put
the difference between
taking a chance and letting it ride
the opposite of
joy and happiness
the synonym of death.
Loneliness
the hell we ourselves create
to safe guard against shit we don't even know about.
fearing the darkness
when sometimes it's the light that's the evil
fearing the closeness
when our hearts and core of our beings long to be close
and that longing so strong that it suffocates
strangling all that was meant to be shared
making it become stale
and stiff with anticipation
because there's hope the cycle will end.
posted by *LadieFire* at 1:11 AM

6 Comments:

If I cite your work as your poetry, may I please use it? This poem explains so much that I myself have not been able to put into words.

Please email me at wskinner66@bellsouth.net

I will not use it without your permission.

Wes

12:25 AM  

"Loneliness
the hell we ourselves create" great line. Nice post

4:44 AM  

You got skills keep on keepin on...stop by sometime...I'm glad I stopped by yours

6:20 PM  

excellent, excellent piece!

3:19 PM  

All can say is COPYRIGHT YOUR SHIT BEFORE SOMEONE TAKES IT!! You've got skills.

That was SO deep!

5:15 PM  

you have such a way with words. You clow me away. This poem exemplifies me tonight.

I would like permission to post it on my blog to share with the world.

please check out my blog or email me.

Thank you for sharing your soul.

8:55 PM  

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